Just For Fun

I entered a short story contest on www.toowrite.com. My story is here http://www.toowrite.com/crybaby-8808. People vote and the top ten are read by a judge who selects the winner. It's about 1100 words long. You're allowed to go up to 1500 words. I like how the final edit came out, but it's hard to capture a story in less than 1500 words.